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What software did you use?

I'm going to guess you used 3Dmax and poser? What did you use? Nice job, by the way... the backgounds look nice.

-Ash

fukinCR1M1N4L responds:

some mysterious program we wont tell anyone about so noobs dont try to make shitty 3d movies so people hate them just like sticks

Great job

Well this goes outside what newgrouds usualy is about, which is good... great even.
I realy liked the diffrent styles you used. It's a nice peice of work, realy. I hope you get a mention on the main page.

Best
-Ash

AloneInTheDark responds:

thank u!

Yeah! I'm from Montreal too!

Dude, I love your work.
You fucking rock.
The art and style is 10/10.
I like the slow pans and rotations.

I'm going to start using rotations in my movies now.

The guitar track was cool too, nice and light grunge.

As for getting out of depression:
exercise is great. Stop drining and smoking and drugs.
eat fruit and vegetables.

Or: take your carte Soleil to a Doctor and say "I'm fuking depressed and I need help." they will refer you to a shrink, the shink will give you antidepresents.

Antidepressant can realy shift ones mood.
I took them for a while and they helped alot.

Email me if you want, we can talk about it more.

10/10

--Ashtanel

dEZart responds:

well thanks for your support:P but I must sa ythat im not a sucidal person...well not anymore...im doing my best to be happy...this movie is most like an message of hope to say that other person can live the same thing and can pass over it..like I did. Thats my message.

Good Job

Realy good.
Some of the motion is realy nice. The part where he fell down looked great, the curve of his back and the position of his legs where realy good.
The part where he walked was nice.
Walking is, as you know, one of the hardest things to have look right.
You little guy walked nicely, he had sort of a "cowboy" look to his walk.

The bit where he rubbed his head was nice and moved well.

One note: He should have had a face from the frist frame.

Keep it up, you have talent... I can tell.

Try to flesh them out a bit more on your next few projects.

Cheers!

Bezman responds:

Thank you very much for all the praise, the excellent review and the encouragement. :)

The reason he doesn't have a face at the start is because the animation is supposed to be about stick-men progressing. The first one wasn't connected so it fell apart, the 2nd one didn't have good enough legs, then the 3rd guy bumped into the tree as he didn't have eyes to start off with.

I think a lot of folk didn't realise that though, so maybe I should make it more obvious when I finish it...

I'll definitely do something a bit more fleshed out than just sticks later on.

Stay funky!

Good job!

Nice work.

Looking forward to the next stuff!

ColinMatthews responds:

thanks, there pretty easy to make so there should be alot of them

Good job!

I like your drawings, I like their facial expressions.

It was good.

Angeldi3 responds:

Is Complete right now

Thanks

good job!

Your voice acting is really good.
The models move really well, they look good too.

You have talent and skill.
Do not stop making these movies.

Knox responds:

im glad you like it

All good

I'm not autralian... what is vic?
I'm guessing a beer?

esspat responds:

yepyep.

Stop motion!

Cool.
What kind of camera did you use? How did you do it?

awesomocity responds:

we made it three years ago, and used an intel camera.

Great Toon

I love the idea of using the text to speech voices, I wish I had thought of that.
Good story & jokes, nice simple characters.
The only thing that is negative that I have to say is: the ending was predictable and lame.
Bang, it blew up.
Lame. Lame. Lame.
You had me right up to the point where it went BANG!
Had the button done nothing, or if it was sticky and the guy who pressed it was left with a sticks button on his figure, or if there was not working button, the thing had just been carved out of a block of wood.. it didn't really work after all.
There are a thousand way you could have ended this toon that would not have been "BANG".

Other then that, great work. I really like the way Lemon though Strawberry was an attention whore.

If there was a story category I would have voted a 5 for the story.

Ashtanel

MonkeyClock responds:

SBC doesn't have fingers kthnx.

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