ashtanel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Assassination Of Grey]

Very good.

a) Your guns and building where beautifull. Very well drawn. What did you use? A wacom pen?

b) Nice silly story with a good beat to it.

The one thing that would have made it better:
More clock banter.

Over all very nice, it has my 5.

["IT" - E1 - the Gun Shop]

Good, but why guns?

Your art work and animation are realy nice, better then 90% of the other toons on this site.
I figure you put 50 up to 100 hours into that work, it shows, it's realy nice.

Problems:
a) You little yellow guy just walked through the door.

b) Pointles violence hides the expression of any real idea, work on that. You are smart enough to find a story that does not end in violence. Use that inteligence that's what it's there for.

That's about it.
Good Job!

[Book of the Dead Trailer]

Good

Ok, since this is a fan peice I can't say much about the story.

You have talent as an artist and animator, keep it up.

[Earth Teh Way It I]

Good.

I command you to be less pesimistic.

[Skateboard-run]

Some of the moves are really nice

Good job!

[(HandCutter) saber test]

Nice work.

Realy nice toon.
Made me chuckle, I didn't see it comming.

Good job!

[schizotypal robot 1]

Just great. I'm looking forward to more

I've added you as one of my favorites.
Your drawing is great,(I like the way it looks he's holding two telephones in his hands) your animation is great.
The over all idea of the robot that thinks it is human is beautifull.

One thing, try to avoid cliche jokes and violence.

I think the ending would have been better if you had left the ending a bit more understated.
He pores the water on his head and fizzles and falls end. The "bang" end up being noise. There is TONS of noise on NG.

[Me and the Devil]

One of the best movies I have seen

Great work.
I just sat back and watched it.
It was just perfect.
Great song.
Nice artwork.

I'm sure this work will recive a low score, but that dosn't mater, it's very good.

[What the hell men (ep. 3)]

Good job!

I liked it.
It was a little funny, it was long but it never got boring.

Well done. Keep up the great work!

[Soft Outer Crust Ep#23]

Why does the sound cut in an out?

It looked good, but the sound was a mess.
I sounded like it was recorded as a bunch of small files. All the background Hiss dies out and it's just not right.
I'm sure you where aware of this, but you couldn't rerecord, so you left it that way.
What I'm saying is that too my ears it didn't sound right.
aside from that, great show!